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Dialogue problem

Posted: Tue Sep 03, 2013 2:03 am
by rijackson741
In the trial by fire quest, when approaching a hole, the dialogue has the sentence "The air around here is much hotter around the hole in the ground here than in the rest of the room". A casualty of too many edits? How about "The air around the hole in the ground is much hotter than in the rest of the room". :)

Re: Dialogue problem

Posted: Tue Sep 03, 2013 3:33 am
by Pyrizzle
The original dialog does seem wordy.

I like your suggestion better. Nice job!