scream pain and fire quest

[sorrow]

Ok easy fix instead of a Phoenix quill we go with Tom's idea of the griffen quill

[Pyrizzle]

Ok easy fix instead of a Phoenix quill we go with Tom's idea of the griffen quill

I like easy fixes!

I was just working on your quest so i will make the necessary changes now. Thanks for the speedy response bud.

What do you think of my idea to have them drop useable and unusable feathers? And the drop rates?

((Will post updated information in a moment))

[sorrow]

Like every other monster we need useable items and useless items I like the broken and unbroken feathers and you need a non broken feather for the quill in the map makers quest and your welcome bro. I will come up with Griffin stats later

Or


We 86 the Phoenix (86 means cut it out) and replace the Phoenix with the griffen stats wise there fore the stats for the Griffin would be the same as the Phoenix mines rebirth ability

[Pyrizzle]

Sounds good to me, I took out Phoenix and replaced it with Griffin instead.

I'm getting close to being ready to post this updated Version of the Dialog.

[I put a change log at the bottom so you can see what i did.]

[Tomcat]

My original intent with the quill and the oak gall was simply to have some items from other areas in the game that the map maker requires, rather like the rotworm cure items, rather than woven in as all-new sub-quests. For instance, the oak gall would just be a drop added to a planned area that would be a valley of living trees of various types (I have a location already mapped out), and presumably a separate quest (to be developed later). I haven't thought out anything specific about the griffins, except that I though they would make an interesting creature to put into a mountainous area somewhere. Not that I object to weaving the griffins in, or replacing them with the phoenix, if you can make it all work.

[Pyrizzle]

[Updated with newly added dialog]

~Work in Progress~

"Our hero (aka you) comes across a small encampment were you find an old man among the encampment who asks for your help."

Old man: Please young boy help us!
Hero:
*What do you need help with old man?
*Whatever old man. (ends conversation, can be restarted)
Old man: We are from the village Ash.
Old man: One day we were betrayed by the Feygard guards sent to defend our villages.
Hero:
*What? The Feygard guards would never do such a thing. You're lying old man! (ends conversation, can be restarted)
*Please going on.
Old man: Our village is overrun by monsters that burn everything they touch.
Old man: The brave fighters of Ash tried to fend them off, but they were all burned alive while trying to protect the village.
Old man: We here are the only ones that got away alive. We fear that if they are not stopped that they will spread and eventually destroy everything.
Hero:
*Okay old man, I will help you destroy this evil.
*No way old man your story is full of lies and I should report you to the Feygard guards and see what they have to say. (ends conversation to be restarted)
Old man: oh good, but before you go destroy this evil you must first find the map maker.
Old man: last I heard he went to Stoutford to get away from everything.
Hero:
*ok, I will go to Stoutford and seek the map maker.
*This sounds like something you should deal with on your own (End conversation, can be restarted)
*Alright but there better be some kind of reward in the end.

"After talking to the old man of ash. He sends you to find the map maker and believes he's in Stoutford."

You travel to Stoutford to find the map maker.(placement will be determined by Tom if he wishes)

Map maker:*looking scared* who are you? What do you want?
Hero:
* I'm looking for a map maker from Ash. Are you him?
* I forget why I am here. (ends conversation to be restarted)
Map maker: Yes I am the map maker. Did Ash survived? Can I go back now? That's why you came right? To tell me I can go home?
Hero:
* Well no I'm sorry to say that the city of Ash has been destroyed. All that's left is a small encampment.
* I'm sorry but the city of Ash is now just a pile of ashes.
Map maker:* crying* Why? Why did those monsters destroy our town?
Hero:
* I don't know but I will find out. That's why I need the map, do you have it?
* I don't know and don't care. Do you have the map I need?
Map maker: Well that's the problem. All my map making supplies were destroyed in ash. If you are able to get the supplies I need, I can make you the map you seek.
Hero:
* Ok, what supplies do you need?
* I don't need the map that bad (ends conversation to be restarted)
* This better be worth it.
Map maker: In order to make the map I require 5 Arulir skin, 10 dead spiders, a Griffin feather, and a gall from an Oaken.
Hero:
* Where can I find a Griffin?
Map maker: I haven't seen a Griffin in years. Last I herd they live up in high places.
Hero
* Where can I find an oaken?
Map maker: The Oakens live in the forest south of here. Please be careful, the Oakens have been known to take out their enemies even after being stricken down. The splinters they shoot out are quite poisonous to humans.
Hero:
* What was it I needed again?
* Where can I find a Griffin?
* Where can I find an oaken?
* I will be right back with the supplies you need. (ends conversation, if you return he asks "Have you found my supplies yet?" then gives you the options listed above again)

"After retrieving the items to make the map you return to the map maker."

Map maker: Did you find my supplies yet?
Hero:
* No not yet. (ends conversation to be restarted)
* Yes, here they are.
* Where can I find a Griffin?
* Where can I find the oakens?
Map maker: Thank you! These will work perfectly.
[You gain 75xp ]
Map maker: While you were gone I found the map u wanted. It was in my pocket this whole time. Funny right?
Hero:
* So I did all that for nothing?
* Very funny.
Map maker: In return for your help, if you ever need a map I'll make you one free of charge.

(map maker can make maps to unknown treasure caves)
[You receive the map]

[Update Quest log, this portion is complete you can now continue on]

"After fighting your way past the dark fire monsters you see their leader standing next to the Feygard commander."

Boss: Awww... so your the one who has been interrupting my plans...
Hero:
* What's going on here?
* Yeah I'm the one that's messing up your plans! Why are you just standing there commander?
* Why is a Feygard commander here?
Boss: The commander is my puppet.
Boss: I bribed him into believing that he will receive riches beyond his wildest dreams if he were to have his troops leave the village of Ash.
Hero:
*but why?
*Why would you do such an awful thing?
Boss: Just for the fun of it... I love hearing you pathetic humans scream in pain and burned by my fire muahahahah!
Commander: I did what you asked NOW WHERE'S MY GOLD!?!?!?!
Boss: You are of no use to me anymore.
Commander: *Becomes consumed by dark fire and screams in agony and is then killed*
Boss: Hahaha yes that is the scream I love.
Boss: Now it's your turn to feel the burn muahahahaha!!!!!
Hero:
*For the shadow you will die!
*Just shut up and die already!
*Please don't hurt me!!!
[Enter Fight with Demon Boss]
[UPDATE QUEST LOG]

"After destroying the dark fire demon boss and receiving the wing of the demon you leave the cave,"

Old man: Did you kill them?
Hero:
* Yes I slayed their leader and here's proof.
* No not yet (ends conversation, can be restarted)
* Can you tell me your story again? (old man retells the story)
Old man: What's this? ... This can't be... Yes it is! Its the wing from the Dark Fire Demon Master!!!
Old man: *Over joyed* You did it! You actually did it!!!
Old man: Oh thank you! Thank you very much! How can we ever repay you?

[ you receive 1000 XP and 500 gold] [Quest is finished]

Old man: Oh please young hero; please allow me to give you a blessing of the shadow.
Hero:
*Sure
*Ill pass thank you. (ends conversation. Is restarted from Old Man last sentence "oh please young hero")
[You receive: Blessing of the Shadow]
Old man: Thank you again hero.


-------------------------------------------------Updates in this version -----------------------
* Changes item requested my mapmaker from Pheonix Feather to Griffin Feather (Can't get to phoenix until after defeating the Demon boss.
* Removed strike text to make it easier to read
* Inserted cue for beginning of the Fight with Demon Boss (Name will be added later)
* Changed Griffin Quill to Griffin Feather... a feather is found, A quill is made. (a quill is an altered feather)
* Demon Boss's name changed to Jezebeth
* Old Man's name changed to

------incomplete----- will finish later. thanks

[sorrow]

Well tom the oak gall can be a continuous drop item like the feather because there are alot of uses for a gall. If you don't mind me using them in the quest.

Same with the Griffin feathers.

I figure we can use the stats of the Phoenix mines the rebirth and we would have the Griffin maybe make its hp and ad stronger like:
Griffin:
Hp:250
Ad:25-30
AP:4/12
AC:220%
BC:250%
Critical:25
Multiplier:2.5
Ecc:50%
Dr:5

How about that for a Griffin?

And the tree walkers (different name sounds better then oakens)

Tree walkers:
HP:300
AP:6/12
AD:50-55
AC:250%
BC:300%
DR:10
on target:
40% chance of daze
50% chance of splinters:
Cause player to lose 20 hp for 6 rounds



If it isn't clear to anyone as of now I want players to have one heck of a time with this quest. Lol

[Tomcat]

Of course it's fine that you use the items. I'll just have to be sure to have them in place for the same release!

[sorrow]

Ok Tom Pyro and I are still working on things and when were done we will post in dev corner and here as well

[Pyrizzle]

Sorry about the incomplete work last night, i had a serious emergency situation at work and it kept me from finishing everything up.

I got a good start, hopefully things will be better tonight and i will be able to get it posted later on.

Happy hunting!!